Possibly this may work
The day has quickly ended
and the sunset is glorious tonight.
Holding you now so closely
to block out the chill in the night,
in Sandy Paradise.
In fact, I like the meaning / flow of this one more.
My meaning to convey is:
Verse 1: Reminds me of beautiful beaches in Sandy Paradise. And how rabbit and I could find so many beautiful seashells. It is like they are parading up the beach for us to view and admire. Also, gives a hint of fun times on the beach. We are DREAMING!!!
Verse 2: Convey how quickly days went with rabbit. How it can cool down at night (enough to do much hugging)
Chorus 1: Chorus intro and highlight that Sandy Paradise represents love.
Verse 3: Nights are fantastic. Stay out late, moon light glimmer on the beach. When the lights are all out, back in the room – the nights are all yours.
Chorus 2: Need to fix this one. Need to convey we are back “down under” far away from Sandy Paradise. We’re dreaming.
Verse 4: Reality of day-to-day life. Yet some where I feel a longing to back to those moments with rabbit.
Chorus 3: Sandy Paradise is calling us to return, simply to relive all our special moments again in Sandy Paradise just like before.
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